All Seems Right

we dance close
you hold me tight
underneath the stars
and the lunar light
all seems right, kissed
by angels from above
but when the music stopped
so did your love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 4:01 PM
Beautiful poem with a very sad deep ending,,Charma
Guzzi Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 4:37 PM
sad..perhaps she was in love with the music? Light & Love
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