All Seeing Eye

The all seeing eye
    fire on the water
        death in the sky
            time standing still
               too late to cry....
                   ...  tribulation  ...
 
May 24 For Paula Swanson's "Blind faith" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 11:23 AM
soup reply for Charles !! :)
Richards Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 7:45 AM
That is similar to how I saw this unique, and darkly surreal picture! Nice poem!! ~ Carrie
Mehta Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 3:40 AM
A wonderful interpretation . Good luck in the contest
A   Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 2:57 AM
good luck in the contest, enjoyed,...p.d.
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