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All Saints Eve

Misty shadowed hosts
          ghastly wisps of fortunes past
                    moonlight from the dead...


     Halloween Senryu Contest
     Sponsored by Laura Loo
     10/10/2017

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M. L. Kiser

September 26, 2018 at 8:55 PM

Chilling...I love it. Belated congratulations.

Charlie Smith

September 29, 2018 at 10:53 AM

Thanks M.L.

Agnes Krampe

October 26, 2017 at 7:14 AM

I love this, Charlie! Congrats!

Charlie Smith

October 26, 2017 at 10:29 AM

Thanks Agnes...

Paul Callus

October 24, 2017 at 2:27 PM

An eerie ghostly image which aptly compliments the provided picture, Charlie. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

October 25, 2017 at 8:14 AM

Thank you Paul...

James Inman

October 24, 2017 at 7:23 AM

Very descriptive write Charlie.

Charlie Smith

October 24, 2017 at 10:19 AM

Thanks James.

Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2017 at 7:13 AM

Excellent, Charlie! Congrats! <3 Kim

Charlie Smith

October 24, 2017 at 10:18 AM

Thanks Kim...

Beautiful Scars

October 24, 2017 at 5:33 AM

love that second line, very creepy senryu dear Charlie :) thank you and congrats :)

Charlie Smith

October 24, 2017 at 10:18 AM

Thank you so much LuLoo...

Moon Flower

October 23, 2017 at 8:16 PM

One of the cutest Halloween write I've read today. Congrats!

Charlie Smith

October 24, 2017 at 10:17 AM

Thank you Moon Flower.

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2017 at 3:28 PM

Congrats to you. I am happy to see this one on the list.

Charlie Smith

October 23, 2017 at 3:35 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Roy Pett

October 23, 2017 at 1:07 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Charlie, great Senryu. :))

Charlie Smith

October 23, 2017 at 3:33 PM

Thank you Roy.

Gary Smith

October 23, 2017 at 11:22 AM

A spookily lovely poem Charlie, congrats :)

Charlie Smith

October 23, 2017 at 3:32 PM

Thank you Gary.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 23, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Back with congrats :) xomo!

Charlie Smith

October 23, 2017 at 11:06 AM

Thanks Maureen...

Andrea Dietrich

October 17, 2017 at 3:28 PM

Oh, Charlie, you and I think alike. I also used mist and wisp in my senryu!! GREAT job! I like how you did it as "ghastly wisps"

Charlie Smith

October 17, 2017 at 7:35 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 17, 2017 at 12:42 PM

Cool poem, Charlie. I love Halloween time ... still have a diabetic sweet tooth for it's youthful exuberance. Kids are so happy this time of the year, especially w/Christmas coming around the corner. Sweet senryu. Love and peace, bro.

Charlie Smith

October 17, 2017 at 7:36 PM

Peace be with you my friend....