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"all Ours" Part 3

I love the feel of your eyelashes on my chest... Your warm embrace and whispers are the best... I love your hair slowly brushing on my face... And your hands on my shoulders never saying its late...

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Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/30/2010 3:56:00 PM

This one too. The picture of them just lying there and their bodies talking to each other Excellent

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/28/2010 7:40:00 PM

You are both so lucky to have each other, Michael, You speak so lovingly of her! This is a very nice series you are developing -- could become one long poem at some point. Love, Carolyn

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/28/2010 10:38:00 AM

very nice and sweet enjoyed it can't wait for part 4 and thanks for all your kind comments faleshia

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/28/2010 6:09:00 AM

I just love the hidden message in your last line Mr. F! ;) ejoyed your love and romance this afternoon.. love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2010 5:09:00 AM

Short write packed with love and romance..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/27/2010 10:30:00 PM

What a beautiful vision Michael... but u are such a visionary in the romance department luv.. your forever Jersey Girl has enjoyed this luv..