Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

"all Our's" Part1&4

The curtains drawn,
                       the doors are locked
                                                 now we are alone..
The lights are out
                   your heart is starting to race
                                                 now come close to me..



Fanning the Embers~ contest by Catie Lindsey

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Poet Destroyer A December 10, 2012 at 8:52 PM you are to sweet and romantic...pd

David Smalling September 3, 2010 at 12:03 PM Hot and anticipative ...

Harry Horsman September 2, 2010 at 9:29 PM the suspense is killing me, Michael, enjoyed this Senryu, Harry

Wilma Neels September 2, 2010 at 7:07 AM Woo hoo, finally! lol, just kidding.. Awesome senryu Michael , luv Wilma

Tom Mcmurray September 2, 2010 at 5:52 AM An almost geometric scene is drawn with you precise senryu Michael. An excellent form implication and sense of order. Great little senryu Michael. tom

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2010 at 7:37 PM Make sure you are alone, How about the back door and windows> Michael, hahaha

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2010 at 6:57 PM OOOOOOOOOOOO! Michael, cozy romantic and all that good loving passion. A senryu full of hot burning desires behind closed doors,..LA

Carolyn Devonshire September 1, 2010 at 6:09 PM Well... don't leave us hanging, Michael. What happens next?? LOL Enjoyed your romantic senryu, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 1, 2010 at 4:43 PM Sounds like a plan Michael.. and Ron and I are in Ocean City Maryland for a week of fun in the sun before heading home to the REAL world now.. enjoyed .. this beach is 'all ours' right now.. luv..

Sara Kendrick September 1, 2010 at 4:13 PM Quiet time at home reads like a peaceful and comfortable place..Sara