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All Our Loose Feelings That Lye Deep Inside

When the sun sets over the mountain Signaling the end of a day Do we pretend our feelings that get put away Just magically light up on display For us to deal with on some far off distant day If only life worked out that way For us to rewrite our feelings we kept out of sight Oh how our world would fill with so much insight That lights up our lives so bright To what degree should we look inside to see How they mold and effect who we want to be When we work through our feelings deep inside Then we allow our minds the freedom to drift to the other side Recharging our batteries to deal with the ones we let lye Hoping to sort them out on this mind-opening ride Making us wonder why we bottle them up before we tried Creating a pit with no bottom side That jeopardizes what allows us to harmonize All the loose feelings we allowed to hide Giving us clarity to float like a butterfly Letting our feeling out without worrying why As they come to life when they meet the sky Creating the ability for us to foresee What our future could be Allowing our natural selection To stay in touch with our mind connection That makes it all glow in the right reflection Leading our life to acceptable perfection That no longer requires protection From our feelings we just let lye When we let our feelings go without detection They can become toxic and risk infection So stay in touch with your internal connection This way all your unanswered questions become part of life's lessons That leaves us with the right perception

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Date: 6/2/2018 1:02:00 PM
Hello Jack Cooper, it is nice to meet you. I hav just read this poem, two verses speaks to me.They are Third and last verses. Have a nice day my friend.
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Jack Cooper
Date: 6/2/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, this poem has something for everyone it speaks of what a lot of us do with feelings we are unsure how to deal with them. Thanks for your feedback Have a great day Jack2

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