All Night

Priceless like a dynamite, priceless like the Jackson Five, Let's make love all night, with all strength and might, while holding pillow so tight, sex will feel so right. Even after losing our sight, it will still be a night. Floating in love like a kite, the next morning will be so bright.

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David Williams

Date: 7/14/2011 12:47:00 PM

hey janix, very romantic, i like it, thanks for your comments David

Janix Asare
Date: 7/14/2011 1:14:00 PM

Thanks too

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/13/2011 6:43:00 PM

Nice romantic expressions, Janix

Janix Asare
Date: 7/14/2011 11:59:00 AM

thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 4:29:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Janix. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Janix Asare
Date: 7/14/2011 12:10:00 PM

THANKS