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my dreams - gentle shower on a withering flower

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Date: 7/12/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thriveni, your thought-provoking monoku reminds me of grace falling like gentle rain.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/12/2024 8:20:00 PM
your kind words and visit brings me joy dear poet. Thank you. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 7/10/2024 8:43:00 AM
i'm not usually a fan of monokus, but i like this one, such a lovely line, and i like the internal rhyme..thanks for your kind comment on my work
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Date: 7/10/2024 7:47:00 PM
Thank you for your visit dear poet. I am glad you liked this. Your yesterday's wishes is one of my fav! Blessings & cheers.
Date: 7/9/2024 11:45:00 AM
wow, this is super!!
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Date: 7/9/2024 7:08:00 PM
I am so glad for your visit and words dear poet. Thank you. Blessings & Cheers.
Date: 7/7/2024 2:26:00 PM
My dream too sit on the back burner as I grow older in age. Lovely monoku
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Date: 7/7/2024 6:56:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I appreciate your words. thank you. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 7/6/2024 9:27:00 AM
I guess we cant stop the ravages of getting older glad I seldom remember my dream :-) hugs jan xx
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/6/2024 7:59:00 PM
Your visit brings so much joy dear poet. getting old is not easy - a fact that is not realized till one gets old! Thanks again. Blessings & Cheers.

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