All In Sight

Man it was all in sight, man it was all a fight.
Tried to reason with words but it was all too subtle.
Trapped in a corner no one beside me.

Fought for an hour just to keep my dream alive.
I finished the battle but my heart's in a sigh. I let her go, now how am I going to survive?

I'm just a kid, nowhere to go.
I try to rewind but all it does is turn into tragic.
All the drama and madness , it just calls for panic.
We all need a soldier...who ever it may be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 24, 2010 at 10:19 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today John. Love, Carol
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