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All In Love

i heard the sound the sound of nail and hammer the nail piercing through his flesh then he looked at me all in love i heard the sound the scourging sound of thistle it went thorugh his skull with gushing out of his blood then he looked at me all in love i heard the sound the sound of shouts the critics,soldiers were raising their voices to be heard and they were heard then he looked at me all in love i heard the sound it was coming from my inside it said 'dont deny me' but i did i ran from them and from him then he looked at me all in love

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Date: 11/28/2024 9:10:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:35:00 AM
Nice to see this One again
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:50:00 PM
Hi David opadiran, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2011 9:38:00 AM
It was all worth the love... what he gave for us... enjoyed your poem.. David, have a blessed day... Linda
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