David Opadiran Poet I do not know?

All In Love

i heard the sound 
 the sound of nail and hammer
the nail piercing through his flesh
then he looked at me
all in love
i heard the sound 
the scourging sound of thistle
it went thorugh his skull with gushing out of his blood
then he looked at me
all in love
i heard the sound 
the sound of shouts
the critics,soldiers were raising their voices to be heard
and they were heard 
then he looked at me
all in love
i heard the sound
it was coming from my inside
it said 'dont deny me' but i did 
i ran from them and from him
then he looked at me
all in love

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Beata Agustin November 28, 2024 at 9:10 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2016 at 11:35 AM Nice to see this One again

Skat A January 10, 2016 at 3:50 PM Hi David opadiran, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing -SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 22, 2011 at 9:38 AM It was all worth the love... what he gave for us... enjoyed your poem.. David, have a blessed day... Linda