David Wallace Poet Enclosed Rhyme

All In All

All In all
I’ve loved my life
The highs and lows 
The joy the strife
The magic moments
Kids and laughs
Deaths and traumas
Financial baths
Friends and foes
That came and went
Pleasure / pain
Equally lent
Warm Summer days
Cold Winter nights
Clear night stars
And harbour lights
Hot August sun
September snow
December gales
July’s soft blow
Love gained and lost
Oft wounded pride
Truths expounded
Sins untried
Through thick and thin
I’ve had a ball
A brilliant earth time
All in all

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 6:03 AM Congratulations on your win David in John Moses Freeman's contest "Praises of Life Precept". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 9, 2011 at 4:04 PM Congrats David on your HM in John's contest with this lovely creation ... enjoy a very special honor for awesome words luv..

John Freeman April 9, 2011 at 11:57 AM Congratulation On your worthy poems success in Hm. David. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire April 9, 2011 at 11:03 AM I admire your upbeat perspective on life, David, taking the good with the bad in stride. Congratulations on your success in John Freemans's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2011 at 10:22 AM Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, David

Carol Sunshine Brown March 25, 2011 at 7:37 AM What a beautiful day and how wonderful it is to be able to read what was on your mind and in your heart when you wrote this poem David. I hope you have a weekend full of new found inspiration. Love, Carol

Ellen Fahey March 24, 2011 at 4:53 PM What a beautiful view of your life....full of gratitude for all of it! Ellen