All In a Day

Awake before the alarm clock started ringing
Lying abed as song birds serenade me, singing
Listening to chirping lyrics, I linger with a smile
Then get ready for work; my weekday lifestyle

A daily ordeal of honking horns and road rage
Impatient drivers, fingers raised in rampage
My parking spot was stolen, a pitfall of being late
It's still morning, and already I feel the hand of fate

Lost a client I was supposed to represent in court
Booked a flight then realized I needed a passport
No time for lunch, I waited in line for a new photo
A kid ran into me. I think he broke my big toe!

It took a while to soothe my senses, but I tried
with a smile on my lips, but my eyes said they lied
My boyfriend just canceled tonight's date
Who does that in email?  A spineless ingrate!

At five I headed home, but the elevator got stuck
Got hit on by some dude. Everything's gone amuck
My car disappeared, so I reported it stolen
Tripped and sprained my ankle. It's swollen!

I took the bus home and while fumbling for keys
Pulled a muscle in my back; couldn't stifle a sneeze
Please, let this day be over! I had nothing to eat
but expired eggs and instant cream of wheat

Lost my appetite and decided to watch TV
Cable was out, which only added to my misery.
I went to bed but heard knocking on my door
"What?" I asked. She said, "Oh, I'm on the wrong floor"

Now, past midnight. The day from Hell was done
but come morning there'd be another one.
I threw the clock out the window, into the street
Tomorrow I'll stay in bed, listening to the birds tweet



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September 12, 2020
All In A Day Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Back to congratulate you for this finely crafted win, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 4:27 AM
Thank you, John.
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September 17, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write about a day from hell. In life they come around. I am with you, "stay in bed, listening to the birds," Enjoy your win.................
Logan Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 1:58 AM
Thanks so very much for liking this, Paula.
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 5:25 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Jenna :) - Have a great day, enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 1:58 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 9:26 PM
Entertaining indeed with endearing smiles of well-spun days outlined in a wealth full of memories, Jenna, this was articulately well executed! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
Logan Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 10:53 PM
Thank you for the honor of a placement, William. I appreciate your kind remarks.
Proxenos Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 11:14 AM
A humorous well written poem Jenna - disaster seems to all come in one day, it will happen soon that everything good and awesome will happen, all day long! I foresee a win for a start! Beautiful poem my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:17 AM
I sincerely appreciate your thoughts on this one, Jennifer. I'm not sure what was expected for this contest, but it's what littered my head. lol
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 6:03 AM
I had fun reading your poem, Jenna. Splendid work of your imagination--yet, many of these things happen daily somewhere, to someone...This poem has to win BIG.
Logan Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:16 AM
I pity those with half these problems in a single day. Thanks for the visit and comments, Vijay.
Gondolf Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 5:22 AM
We’ve all had days when nothing seems to go right, but the sun always rises the next day. Nicely written, Jenna, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:15 AM
Thanks so much, John. You're always so encouraging.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 2:37 AM
I had disappointing days, but never like yours. Now I have been retired for 19 years, but troubles follow me. Today I have an attack of vertigo and my computer speakers decided to die on me. Wish I can throw something out of the window like you. Loved your poem. ~~
Logan Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:15 AM
oh Victor, I'm so sorry. The problems in this write are all fictional, but thank you for leaving your comments. I've heard vertigo is terrible. Get well soon.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 2:25 AM
- A bit of a day, Jenna ... but, I will not disturb you ... enjoy your day in bed :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:14 AM
Quite a miserable one! haha Anne-Lise. I'm awake and thanks for stopping by.
Ermine Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 7:37 PM
... Engrossing one...! Sounds as though the chirping birds will stand a better chance of providing worthy defence in court that following day.... Sleep, dear corrupt lawyer, dream of salvation....
Logan Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:13 AM
That's a day from hell I'd not want to live. Thanks, Sigrid.
Watt Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Sounds like a Murphy's Law day. And it started out so well! Great writing, Jenna, hope you never have such an awful day.
Logan Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Wouldn't that be an awful day? Thank you for the kind comments, John.
Bauer Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 1:32 PM
i sure hope this wasn't a real day in your life, jenna! you've described it so well in rhyme, though! best of luck in the contest...
Logan Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 2:26 PM
Hi Ilene. Not a word of truth in it, except for listening to the birds in the morning. Thanks so much.
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Oh Jenna I'd be tempted to stay in bed the next day after a day like this . I love the way you started and ended the poem with positivity, a lesson for us all that these things will pass and tomorrow is a new day:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Everything comes to pass, Jan. Some things just take more time and patience. Thanks for your supportive thoughts.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 11:20 AM
This sounds like the day from HELL! It is marvelous. Thank you for penning this one.
Logan Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Thanks for reading the plight of this poor person, and leaving your comments, Caren.
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