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All In a Day

Nothing like new polished shoes, new dress, when restarting school, up the bus in one and twos, warm jacket, embroidered wool! Cackle of sounds and laughter, words without weighted wisdom, atop a double decker, relish of childhood freedom! Lessons in school, miles away, but the journey is more fun, here is start of a school day, open bus under warm Sun! Hardly aged eight or nine, but act adults on our own, dormant hormones like red wine, mature well with age when grown! Little romances still abound, amongst boys and girls in bus, notice my heart throb around, in pony tail and white dress! Two rows in front to my right, reading a book as she does, wish could next to her alight, to admire her pretty tress! Bragging boys, made up tales, to win a smile from the girls, Shy faces with painted nails, do at times, flash teeth like pearls! In hours journey to school dome, many fantasies are spun, then dreams are ferried back home, for the following day rerun! Up and down familiar roads, The bus embarks on its way, Heavy satchels with book loads, Slice of life, all in a day!
2nd placement Written 04/Sept/2020 All in a dayl Sponsor William Kekaula

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Date: 9/17/2020 5:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Krish :) - Have a great day, enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/17/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Anne- Lise. Happy it was liked. Have a great day! BW krish
Date: 9/16/2020 9:45:00 PM
A homogeneous rendering, Krish, underlies the essentials of our reason! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/16/2020 10:34:00 PM
Thanks William! honoured! Thanks for the challenge! I enjoyed writing this!
Date: 9/4/2020 6:13:00 AM
- "dormant hormones like red wine, matures well with age when grown "is my favorite line in this wonderful poem, Krish :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/4/2020 6:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks so much for your thumbs up on this poem! You are a wonderful poetry soup pal!!:)

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