"all I Want Is Some One To Love Me"

I give my love to,
but all u do is stabb me in the back.

U say u love me, but all u do is mess wit my head.
If u dont love me then  leave me,

I dont need to be put through all this pain n sorrow.
I gave u everything u asked 4 n all i get in return is " I HATE U" its okay i understand u have 
been through alot.

But why take it out on someone u love.
No matter wat i will always love u 4 who u are....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Thekidster Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 4:54 AM
You're loved Ashley, although perhaps not truly by he. How could anyone say "I HATE U" to someone so sweet? Great Write Ashley. Best Wishes Always, Bill
Christian Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 11:12 AM
Love is meant to be unconditional ashley and it sound like this personw ant everything their own way. peopel like this just aint worth it, god loves you, and when people let us down he is the one who picks us back up. be strong dear poetry soup friend, God bless you from diane
Murphy Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 9:42 AM
you will always be loved because god is always around stay strong faleshia
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