"all I See Is You"

Its a rainy day and Im waiting on that train to come in again.
Feels like forever since we held eachother close and said goodbye
But in my mind I know when I close my eyes all I see is you....
It could be a storm outside but all I know is when I close my eyes
all I see is you... Stealing kisses on that platform stay with me
like the rays of the sun on a summer day..But when the rain starts
to fall and the clouds are blue.... But in my mind I know..
when I close my eyes all I see is you..A long ride  home doesn't 
clear my head, music loud the sounds from what we said..  But 
when I close my eyes all I see is you ..........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 6, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Michael. Love, Carol
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March 3, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Heartfelt poem, Michael, filled with the longing one feels after seeing a loved one leave. Memories of the way they looked when last we saw them certainly stay in our minds. Love, Carolyn
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