All I Ever Hoped For

around the time your eyes met mine
  i ran in fields of those unclean-
  i saw you stand with feet so sore
  awaiting stars that shall align
  for you’re the one that i adore-
  your cashmere moon sees stars serene; 
  a song with tunes caught in between 
  what used to be what i forgot-
  the hope of truth that love bestowed
  has planted joy from love’s seed sowed
  the woe I wore was doffed by thee,
  embrace the way you swept debris;
  i ache when you are not near me-
  our dulcet love as pure as gold,
  affection as my heart you hold-
  destruction fears what of romance,
  seduction steers a love perchance
  if dreams of me you dream at night, 
  must i admit i dream of you?
  a love too splendid for thy sight...
for you have made my hopes come true


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(I hope I did IP right, I'm still learning)
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Roper Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 9:44 PM
laura, love like there is no tomorrow...congratulation on your win. Hugs Eve
Watt Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 4:15 PM
Lu Loo, so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. I love "the woe I wore was doffed by thee" and the whole amorous vibe. Great job on the rhythm/rhyme constraints, too. Congrats on your high podium landing ~ John
Gondolf Avatar
January 27, 2020 at 1:32 PM
I enjoyed your sweet romantic poem, Luloo, congrats on your win. Your meter was perfect. :) Hugs, John
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Hello Lu Loo, oh this so romantic. i feel the love of the person in this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Hello LuLoo,you are welcome. x Darlene.
Scars Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 8:10 AM
thank you, you too sweet Darlene! x:-)-luloo
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