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All I Ever Hoped For

around the time your eyes met mine i ran in fields of those unclean- i saw you stand with feet so sore awaiting stars that shall align for you’re the one that i adore- your cashmere moon sees stars serene; a song with tunes caught in between what used to be what i forgot- the hope of truth that love bestowed has planted joy from love’s seed sowed the woe I wore was doffed by thee, embrace the way you swept debris; i ache when you are not near me- our dulcet love as pure as gold, affection as my heart you hold- destruction fears what of romance, seduction steers a love perchance if dreams of me you dream at night, must i admit i dream of you? a love too splendid for thy sight... for you have made my hopes come true ********************************** (I hope I did IP right, I'm still learning) howmanysyllables.com 1.9.20 Strict Rhyme and Meter Poetry Contest Sponsor - Son of Spock

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Date: 2/5/2020 9:44:00 PM
laura, love like there is no tomorrow...congratulation on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/27/2020 4:15:00 PM
Lu Loo, so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. I love "the woe I wore was doffed by thee" and the whole amorous vibe. Great job on the rhythm/rhyme constraints, too. Congrats on your high podium landing ~ John
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Date: 1/27/2020 1:32:00 PM
I enjoyed your sweet romantic poem, Luloo, congrats on your win. Your meter was perfect. :) Hugs, John
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Date: 1/14/2020 5:57:00 PM
Hello Lu Loo, oh this so romantic. i feel the love of the person in this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2020 5:55:00 PM
Hello LuLoo,you are welcome. x Darlene.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/15/2020 8:10:00 AM
thank you, you too sweet Darlene! x:-)-luloo

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