All I Ever Hoped For

around the time your eyes met mine
  i ran in fields of those unclean-
  i saw you stand with feet so sore
  awaiting stars that shall align
  for you’re the one that i adore-
  your cashmere moon sees stars serene; 
  a song with tunes caught in between 
  what used to be what i forgot-
  the hope of truth that love bestowed
  has planted joy from love’s seed sowed
  the woe I wore was doffed by thee,
  embrace the way you swept debris;
  i ache when you are not near me-
  our dulcet love as pure as gold,
  affection as my heart you hold-
  destruction fears what of romance,
  seduction steers a love perchance
  if dreams of me you dream at night, 
  must i admit i dream of you?
  a love too splendid for thy sight...
for you have made my hopes come true


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(I hope I did IP right, I'm still learning)
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Date: 2/5/2020 9:44:00 PM
laura, love like there is no tomorrow...congratulation on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/27/2020 4:15:00 PM
Lu Loo, so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. I love "the woe I wore was doffed by thee" and the whole amorous vibe. Great job on the rhythm/rhyme constraints, too. Congrats on your high podium landing ~ John
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Date: 1/27/2020 1:32:00 PM
I enjoyed your sweet romantic poem, Luloo, congrats on your win. Your meter was perfect. :) Hugs, John
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Date: 1/14/2020 5:57:00 PM
Hello Lu Loo, oh this so romantic. i feel the love of the person in this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2020 5:55:00 PM
Hello LuLoo,you are welcome. x Darlene.
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Beautiful Scars
Date: 1/15/2020 8:10:00 AM
thank you, you too sweet Darlene! x:-)-luloo
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