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All Hallows' Eve

i hear the whispers
softly veiled in evening mist..
               moonlight moves - this night

          13 Oct 2017

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Line Gauthier

April 8, 2021 at 9:48 PM

lovely, David ~

Nette Onclaud

October 28, 2017 at 7:08 PM

mellow, mellow with the finest of lines, david.. huggs

Paul Callus

October 26, 2017 at 10:16 AM

The first two lines prepare the setting for this eerie senryu, David; the end line, a fitting climax. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul