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all hallows' eve

i hear the whispers softly veiled in evening mist.. moonlight moves - this night 13 Oct 2017

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Date: 10/28/2017 7:08:00 PM
mellow, mellow with the finest of lines, david.. huggs
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:16:00 AM
The first two lines prepare the setting for this eerie senryu, David; the end line, a fitting climax. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/24/2017 7:30:00 AM
I like this very much. I seems to be setting up a long ghost story. Nicely done David.
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Date: 10/24/2017 7:16:00 AM
Love the last line! Congrats! <3 Kim
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Date: 10/24/2017 5:38:00 AM
it's creepy when you hear those whispers! great senyru dear David! thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 10/23/2017 3:35:00 PM
David, this one is REALLY good. For me , one of the best! Congrats to you.
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Date: 10/23/2017 11:00:00 AM
Terrific work David, congratulations...
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Date: 10/23/2017 7:27:00 AM
Gorgeous :) congratulations! xomo
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