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“The biggest lie about getting older is that excitement and growth end with youth”. MO Defiant by design, brazen Youth glides, Striding beneath the banner ‘come what may’; Flirting with fickle winds, taming the tides, They pinky promise that they’re here to stay. Allured along by a wondering eye, Young naive charm trumps wisdom’s tested truth; Sworn on a twinkling diamond star up high, Dreams dance in rainbow palette over Youth. Growing up fast - the poignant part indeed, And eager Youth can’t pause the ticking pace. Upon that sweeping hand it swaps its lead For the kind, noble arms of wisdom’s grace.

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Date: 1/16/2025 9:05:00 AM
Margarita, funny that I took a similar path on my own poem to this prompt - took me two weeks--congrats on your write
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/28/2025 11:06:00 AM
That was a great theme! Thank You!
Date: 1/12/2025 3:46:00 PM
youth wins then become wise, and interesting and delicious poem, enjoyed a lot
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/12/2025 5:24:00 PM
Thank you, now I know it tastes good too:)
Date: 1/12/2025 3:25:00 PM
Nice take on the theme Mags. Soupmail
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/12/2025 3:54:00 PM
Ahhh gotcha
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/12/2025 3:37:00 PM
Thanks Tom. My allusion to Twinkle Twinkle little star calls for Wonder-ing. How I wonder What you are! :)

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