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life spins rapidly by. she wonders, why she's able not to cry. have her tears dried out? has she gone numb from the doubt? she tries to pull herself out, but she now has nothing she can't live without. she stares ever so blankly from the fifth floor, wondering is there anything left to adore? she given up hope, she is no more. sadly now, she's nothing more, then a cut up body lying on the floor.

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Date: 4/27/2011 2:44:00 AM
did nt realise the age of some of these poets ,so I am sorry you read mine as my are not really for your age group .. have just read yours you write very well for so young so keep up your writing you should be very proud of your work smiles sarah x
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