Darlene Gifford Poet Rhyme

All God's Creatures

One day on a walking trail,
I crushed to death
a helpless snail.

The crunching sound
under my feet,
caused my heart to skip a beat.

Why feel bad,
you might say?
It's just a snail
that got in your way.

But a life is a life,
no matter how small.
And I thank my God,
for making us all!

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Nigel Fox October 4, 2014 at 3:49 PM I too hate it when I kill an animal Its all a matter of size we all forget Darlene Gifford October 4, 2014 at 3:57 PM And God is gracious and quick to forgive. Thanks, Nigel! Blessings, Darlene

Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 7:20 PM Oh isn't it a dreadful sound when you inadvertently tread on one - I do throw them out of my greenhouse they attack my plants and i don't want to share:-) Hugs Jan xxx Darlene Gifford October 3, 2014 at 8:04 PM So I guess I was right! They are part of the food chain. Thanks for your answer, Jan, and I am sorry about your plants. Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 7:39 PM The thrushes and also hedgehogs eat them i often find the empty shells in the garden so they do serve some purpose apart from wrecking all my tender plants:-) hugs jan xxx Darlene Gifford October 3, 2014 at 7:35 PM They do cause a lot of damage to plants. I agree! And yes, it is the most dreadful sound when you step on one. Eve wondered, and so do I what their purpose is here? Do you know? God must have his reasons. Could they be food for other bugs? Just guessing. But that would be a terrible reason for their existence?

Eve Roper October 3, 2014 at 7:10 PM Good write Darlene, I walk my dog around the yard and sometimes I will feel and hear that crunch I usually think yuck but you're right God did make as all and they must have a purpose in the ecosystem. Darlene Gifford October 3, 2014 at 7:27 PM I didn't mean to make you feel guilty, Eve, because I believe most of us have had this experience. But my purpose was to make others stop and think about this situation, and by your reaction, I think I succeeded! Blessings, Darlene