All For You

My heart My soul My mind My body Is all for you I dont think there is anything I would not do for you Your heart is it mine? Your soul am I a part of it? Your mind am I ever on it? Your body does it belong to me? Everything that I have is your's too Everything I am is all because of you I do not think that you understand Just how much I wish I could just hold your hand I dont think that you know just how much you mean to me I know that you dont believe me but it is true it is ALL FOR YOU............

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Jose Velazquez

Date: 11/25/2010 9:48:00 PM

The emotions you describe are a very naive idea of love. They are very grandiose in their depiction of love. Love isn't about owning a person or giving yourself to a person. Love is about sharing happiness with someone who chooses to share their happiness with you. I love the passion of your words, but sadly the days of me saying things like this are long since gone. Try not to let your heart get broken, for the way you write is very innocent and endearing.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/25/2010 8:22:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and fantastic.. check out the contests.. good luck with luv and H.T. Day to u..

Rachel Hozey

Date: 11/24/2010 10:25:00 PM

cute poem..happy thanksgiving