All Dear

People saw that wonderful sky
Where there was my colour among the remembered
Sunsets and the country of all dear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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September 15, 2011 at 7:30 AM
I like you poem, I've seen lots of Haiku with too few sillables, none before with too many, still I feel the meaning contained with in your words is very well presented this way - enjoyed the read.
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