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People saw that wonderful sky Where there was my colour among the remembered Sunsets and the country of all dear

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Date: 9/15/2011 7:30:00 AM
I like you poem, I've seen lots of Haiku with too few sillables, none before with too many, still I feel the meaning contained with in your words is very well presented this way - enjoyed the read.
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