All At Sea

Oh how I wish I wasn’t me,
Buta glorious master of the sea,
Whose sails  have caught a steady wind
but I've dropped anchor
for I have sinned
 


Judgement now must soon be cast,
Much longer here I may not last,
As sky and sea start to encroach
Clouds build and gather
In dark reproach.

I turn my gaze at human kind
So much to love in them I find.
Deftly around the rocks they steer
Helping the ones that stray too near.

As do the souls that pass me by, 
they fear my death and so they try;
They do not know, they cannot see
The anchor’s lodged in the soul of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Scott Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 7:24 PM
Glad I found this :) quite lovely.
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:32 PM
Darkly meaningful. Nice crafting, Tansy. Write on, please! Thanks, Gershon
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Nicely done Tansy--I like the ending.
Gondolf Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 4:48 AM
Hi Tansy, I think the meter is much better in this rewrite, the poem has a really nice flow to it. Nicely done my friend. Hugs, john
Roekaerts Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 5:52 AM
Really value your input. It's so hard to judge one's own work. From now on I will work on my poems
One Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 4:30 AM
Deep poetry and good use of metaphor.. I wrote about the sea also today... You write very well..
Roekaerts Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Thank you. I wS actively trying use metaphor in my poems, so to say that my attempt was good, means I succeeded in my goal. Now I need to work on imagery...
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