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All Alone

Tiny shoes sit alone waiting for the girls return. They are now too small. *For Raul's Contest still life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/23/2010 3:22:00 PM
Makes one think of what could have been , I see some images~~now , I would like to say you have left me hanging~~how about a update on your contest!?at this point you are the winner(Im Hung) LOL~~Rick
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Date: 5/15/2010 12:40:00 PM
well done on the picture, seen it, enjoyed your stlye of haiku,..p.d.
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:45:00 PM
Hi Gareth..hope all is well with u as u have not been on Soup a while and I hope all is OK ... missing u and your poetry .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/26/2010 9:43:00 PM
This was a very nice one, Gareth. SOrry I don't see you more often here! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/26/2010 1:39:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, dear Gareth. Soup Mail.
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Date: 4/24/2010 12:11:00 AM
aw, this is a cute write.but kind of sad, in a joyful way, that she grew up, but is so grown, she forgot to return.this was a success, good luck. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:46:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Gareth. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:50:00 AM
Unfortunately time flies...I still have my ballerina shoes (in a box). Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/18/2010 11:06:00 PM
I love the way you described Raul's picture..excellent view..Charma
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:56:00 PM
Thank you for your much valued honour to my poem Gareth in your contest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/18/2010 11:48:00 AM
Very nice interpretation...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:31:00 AM
Nice job with the contest photo, Gareth.
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