All Alone

Tiny shoes sit alone
  waiting for the girls return.
   They are now too small.

*For Raul's Contest still life

childhoodhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

May 15, 2010 at 12:40 PM

well done on the picture, seen it, enjoyed your stlye of haiku,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 3, 2010 at 3:45 PM

Hi Gareth..hope all is well with u as u have not been on Soup a while and I hope all is OK ... missing u and your poetry .. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2010 at 9:43 PM

This was a very nice one, Gareth. SOrry I don't see you more often here! LUv, andrea

Iolanda Scripca

April 26, 2010 at 1:39 PM

Beautiful Haiku, dear Gareth. Soup Mail.

Lynette Chachere

April 24, 2010 at 12:11 AM

aw, this is a cute write.but kind of sad, in a joyful way, that she grew up, but is so grown, she forgot to return.this was a success, good luck. -Always&Forever Lynette