All About Her

I noticed her eyes all from the start,
And from that moment hoped we wouldnt ever part,

She can sing and manage and do so much stuff,
When i worked this all out i smiled and let out a sigh and a puff,

Her beauty was something completely out of this world,
She made me so nervous i thought i could have hurled,

She began to open up and show me her true self,
This chick was one of a kind and only top shelf,

We talked on the phone and it was all very brief,
But that misunderstanding gave me so much grief,

I was so sad i felt i had let her down,
All through that night my face was a frown,

So i messaged her again and apologised some more,
She wouldnt reply it shook me to my core,

We tried to meet up it was meant to be by the lake,
She stood me up, i hope her intentions are not fake,

Ill try again and hope we can meet
All over some mexican, something tasty to eat,

Maybe this wont work out but i have to try,
If it doesnt work out im still just a guy,

I hope one day that we can be true friends,
Maybe one day we can bump together our ends,

I will try to please her, and fullfill all of her most intimate needs
Ill go down on her until she cant take it, but only when she pleads

Ill bite her and spank her and yank on her hair,
But ill promise to do it all with such love and care 

My imagination runs wild and my heart pounds so hard,
Please dont send me a message this is my last card

I can only think about you through the day and the night,
Im so scared im to full on and that you might take flight

You are so beautiful all from within
Your kindness your soul where do i begin,

You are pretty and beautiful and i love that about you
I think youre stuck in my head with a whole ton of glue

You have sparked something from the inside of me,
When i look at your photos my face lights up with glee

You make me feel like a kid with butterflies all through, 
I hope its no game, that it is real for you

xoxox

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/7/2017 7:51:00 PM
This is lovely, this was actually written for me xxx
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