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I dont know much about her but I heard she wasnt that talkative She didnt like being alive She was numb to all the pain she had to go through I heard she didnt like anything that was green She ate roman noodles everynight for supper She always wore flannels and bellbottoms Sometimes i seen her wear dresses and fancy tops But lately shes been wearing band shirts She wears converse shoes and uses an army bag for school I know that she dosent like to communicate through talking... only through her peoms or sometimes even her songs. I see her drawing and painting all the time She draws famous people She would like to be famous and not so unknown When she tries to speak to anyone they always walk away and leave her alone When she gets home she goes upstairs to play her bass guitar She hates chocolate cake but loves chocolate Her family left her behind because she cant forget her past Sometimes when shes alone she contemplates the meaning behind her life Her favorite color is gray because her life is black and white Everything she says is false according to the world She is not so innocent I understand that she dreams about the perfect life When she opens her eyes they are pitch black She is someone that is fake She acts nothing like she should She is very grungy and unclean She knows of no safety and of no time Her life is smashed into pieces by the giant sun She will always be a ghost She knows of no god She crawls around in the world of death She remains forgotten

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/6/2012 4:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Shayla. This such a nice piece too. I like it.
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:03:00 PM
SHAYLA, Congratulations, with the wonderful “ALL ABOUT YOU" win! No one can say it as perfect as YOU CAN!” I have been meaning to stop by and congratulate each winner in this contest. Have yourself a great night~ PD
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/6/2012 8:06:00 AM
ha well thank you, and have a goodnight also :)
Date: 6/2/2012 3:27:00 PM
oh, my this is so sad in parts of it. I see you used third person as I did but more for the sad effect! I really like how you did this challenge. And I hope that last l line is not too real!! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/31/2012 6:19:00 PM
Congrats, Shayla. Excellent. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/6/2012 8:05:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 5/30/2012 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!! Terry
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/30/2012 5:28:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2012 10:14:00 AM
Shayla congrats on your win..David
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2012 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "All About You" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2012 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations Shayla, pleased to know you xx
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you

Book: Shattered Sighs