All About Her

I dont know much about her
but I heard she wasnt that talkative
She didnt like being alive
She was numb to all the pain she had to go through

I heard she didnt like anything that was green
She ate roman noodles everynight for supper
She always wore flannels and bellbottoms
Sometimes i seen her wear dresses and fancy tops
But lately shes been wearing band shirts

She wears converse shoes and uses an army bag for school
I know that she dosent like to communicate through talking... only through her peoms
or sometimes even her songs.

I see her drawing and painting all the time
She draws famous people
She would like to be famous and not so unknown
When she tries to speak to anyone they always walk away and leave her alone

When she gets home she goes upstairs to play her bass guitar
She hates chocolate cake but loves chocolate
Her family left her behind because she cant forget her past

Sometimes when shes alone she contemplates the meaning behind her life
Her favorite color is gray because her life is black and white
Everything she says is false according to the world

She is not so innocent
I understand that she dreams about the perfect life
When she opens her eyes they are pitch black

She is someone that is fake
She acts nothing like she should
She is very grungy and unclean

She knows of no safety
and of no time
Her life is smashed into pieces by the giant sun

She will always be a ghost
She knows of no god
She crawls around in the world of death
She remains forgotten

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/6/2012 4:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Shayla. This such a nice piece too. I like it.
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:03:00 PM
SHAYLA, Congratulations, with the wonderful “ALL ABOUT YOU" win! No one can say it as perfect as YOU CAN!” I have been meaning to stop by and congratulate each winner in this contest. Have yourself a great night~ PD
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/6/2012 8:06:00 AM
ha well thank you, and have a goodnight also :)
Date: 6/2/2012 3:27:00 PM
oh, my this is so sad in parts of it. I see you used third person as I did but more for the sad effect! I really like how you did this challenge. And I hope that last l line is not too real!! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/31/2012 6:19:00 PM
Congrats, Shayla. Excellent. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 6/6/2012 8:05:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 5/30/2012 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!! Terry
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/30/2012 5:28:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2012 10:14:00 AM
Shayla congrats on your win..David
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Shayla Dendinger
Date: 5/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2012 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "All About You" contest Shayla. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/30/2012 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations Shayla, pleased to know you xx
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you
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