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Enlightenment is - nothing but serenity. No obstacles left. Syllable count: 5,7,5 Contest: Marvin's "Haiku on Enlightenment" Date: 15 August 2014

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Date: 1/16/2016 3:10:00 PM
This is an excellent senyru if you remove all punctuation and use only lower case IMHO. The thought is brilliant. I really like this one too.
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:22:00 PM
I would love no obstacles. I need enlightenment!!!
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Date: 8/26/2014 6:05:00 AM
- Dear Archana, a great haiku !!! - Good luck in the contest, hope you'll win - I wish you a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2014 2:12:00 AM
Done well Archana. Wish you luck in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:41:00 AM
Nicely defined, Archana
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Date: 8/15/2014 12:49:00 PM
great haiku good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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