All About Enlightenment

Enlightenment is -
nothing but serenity.
No obstacles left.

Syllable count: 5,7,5

Contest: Marvin's "Haiku on Enlightenment"
Date: 15 August 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gentry Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 3:10 PM
This is an excellent senyru if you remove all punctuation and use only lower case IMHO. The thought is brilliant. I really like this one too.
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:22 PM
I would love no obstacles. I need enlightenment!!!
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 6:05 AM
- Dear Archana, a great haiku !!! - Good luck in the contest, hope you'll win - I wish you a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walker  Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 2:12 AM
Done well Archana. Wish you luck in the contest. Verlena
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Nicely defined, Archana
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 12:49 PM
great haiku good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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