All Abnormalities Cured
All Abnormalities Cured
How was my poem's initial impact?
Maybe some things it might lack;
Much imagination and creativity
Too many words in a proclivity.
My poem is bursting at the seems
Meet your needs and fulfil dreams
Exactly what you want me to share;
Will free you from sin and all despair.
You know what my poem meant
Recognizable and not incoherent
So fine friend can be rest assured
All abnormalities my poems cured.
Could not say diseases though.
On second thought maybe a
diseased mind in a temporary
state.
Jim Horn
Copyright © James Horn | Year Posted 2017
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