All

all I see when I look at you
a reflection of my feelings
a mirror of what is true
I now know that I finally got it right
I am not afraid to show
all I feel for you inside

all you give comes forth so easily
all you say falls softly on my heart
a strong force field with kinetic energy
that keeps my warm even when we're apart

I don't care that I'm not your first love
I don't care about what happened in your past
here in this moment, now in this time
all I know is that I want to be your last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 25, 2010 at 8:28 AM
I am happy your poetry was among the poetry I had a chance to read today J B. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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August 24, 2010 at 8:33 PM
AWWW THIS IS SUCH A SWEET WRITE~ ENJOYED *LUV ~S.K.A.T.
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