Alive

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Alive

Sometimes I scroll on the obituaries,
and see people who had dreams, life,
and something to live for;
I see their eyes looking back at me,
with “you have something to live for”,
glowing in their eyes…..


Word Count: 37

Date: 25/02/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 2/25/2017 12:26:00 AM
Teddy, I love it. Never thought of this, never heard anything like it before. Yet I look at obituaries too. I anteed up a 7 here. : ) Although I felt compelled to look up the spelling of the past tense of "ante," and one or two 'e's are both correct. I went with two - felt it looks a little better. But what do I know? They don't talk to me. ; )
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/25/2017 4:47:00 AM
Hi Doug. Thank you so much for enjoying my piece!!! Have a fun-filled weekend!!! ;-)
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Doug Vinson
Date: 2/25/2017 12:30:00 AM
Hmm.... not so sure about that spelling looking better now....