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Alive

I wish had the pure heart as you say
I get tempted in various ways
I do have dark thoughts, filthy desires
But amongst all these 
There is little ray of light
A glimmer of hope
That upholds my strive
to keep whatever innocence left in me- Alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/2/2010 11:06:00 PM
Nice piece of muse, carefully chosen your title could add weight to the piece!
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Date: 12/2/2010 10:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem Ashek.I enjoyed it.-kashinath
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