Susan Woodrow Poet Couplet

Alignment Guide

As I’m bowed, in cares distraught
Lightness unbends, thru an arbor caught

In the rigid coils of tight binds
Gladness interlaces with vines that unwind

Netted in a shadow of grasping night
Moonlit petals glow their reflective sight

Entrenched in weight of concrete inveighs
Nectarine wings point the scented airy way…

This entry is just the beginning of sanctuary
Gardens small grow and call the wisdom of trees…

Utopian dreams realign where nature breathes
Inviting serenity in wraps of soothing wreathes

Deep as the roots and high as a sun-ride
Elevation is granted where greenery’s the guide.

(8/18/2020: '87 Skipjack 28; Fresno. Sanctuary contest)

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Brian Sambourne July 26, 2021 at 7:46 PM Hello Susan, Another thought provoking write that seizes original rhyme by the throat. Consistently, you prod the reader to think carefully on each challenging line. As you write, there is indeed a spiritual quality to greenery. Best wishes, Brian Susan Woodrow July 27, 2021 at 9:30 PM Hi Brian, thank you...I need to garden to feel alright so now I am living in an apartment, my interior and balcony is slowly filling up with plants! :)

Silent One August 22, 2020 at 6:04 AM Some lovely lines here and glad you have method to achiever your alignment ;). Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Susan Woodrow August 22, 2020 at 9:17 AM haha yeah it's funny how a winding way gets thoughts straightened out .. thanks for the inspiring contest :)

Kim Rodrigues August 19, 2020 at 10:47 AM Nice one! Susan Woodrow August 19, 2020 at 4:10 PM thank you :)