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Aliens (6 Cinquain)

ALIENS (six Cinquain) “creatures! another world? just think how far it is beyond the blue and heaven too ALIENS!” “lizards!” “yes with rough scales and with bulging eyeballs that can see right through a human REPTILES!” “safety? are we all safe? are these reptiles friendly?” "some say their long tongues spit poison. DEADLY!” “defense! can they be killed? how large are these lizards?” “about the size of a frisbee.” “ALERT!” “asking. have you seen one?” “yes I saw one last night flying – a colorful saucer.” “ALAS!” “truly.” “the myths are true?” “yes they are among us. you’d better check your basement.” “HORRORS!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 3/28/2010 10:14:00 PM
HEHE. Very cool write and perfectly written series of Cinquain, Daver. The content made me laugh. You have a vivid imagination and that's so great. It makes you a good writer. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my Cinquains. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/23/2010 6:01:00 PM
LOL wonderful use of this form ... just finished reading Caroline's Atlantis book ... WOW ... there are too many talented folks here ... its intimidating or if I look at the half full glass, I guess its just challenging ... smile ...
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Date: 3/23/2010 11:07:00 AM
Little humor here...Keep the humorous pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/22/2010 10:46:00 AM
funny!! enjoyed, you are talented.
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Date: 3/21/2010 6:41:00 PM
Thank goodness I haven't got a basement, but I'll look under the bed ,just in case :) :) A fun poem that skips along at a merry pace. Thank you Daver for reading some of mine....cheers Margaret
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:52:00 AM
This was a fun read Daver, and thank you for your wonderful comments on my new poem the MASK...I am in the process of moving and recovery so I have not had time for writing, soon as the moving is done I will be back again. Thank you again! ~Tru~
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Date: 3/20/2010 12:54:00 PM
When i think of eliens i often think of creatures that are peaceful.. highly advanced and has the power to observe us with us ever knowing they are there. Loved any kind of science write or story. Have a great weekend.:)
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:41:00 PM
shiver and giggle...who is alien to whom? Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2010 2:39:00 PM
Boy this is fun 2 read. Once again I have enjoyed the reading. Wonderful job...Have a great day...Irma
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:35:00 PM
Lucky those folks that don't have basements, haha. so what is inspiring this kind of poetry in you today, dear friend? And how are you doing today? LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:42:00 AM
Is that where they're hiding out, Daver? I had a good laugh reading this. Now how about writing a limerick about aliens for my contest? Love, Carolyn
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