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Alien - poem Father barred Mother marred Words are isolated Bloody hunger to hug Beauty killing me everyday And I am angry on mocking Bird shoot his blinking eye Repent and curse own fate Dishonest trips in chariot Celebrating every night And we are counted as valuless And taken for granted as impotent who has no choice Facts hidden under my pillow asking every night who is nominee If you wait till doomsday For apoclapyse to hope a change, you are must be liar As father never let free Society morbidity Never likes this diversity To come, so I tried to be blind and modest Which lives safely in their sweet in nestle This how we bargain on no profit no loss But as wasted to burn at last as alian.

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Date: 1/12/2016 4:46:00 PM
A very warm welcome to Poetry Soup! India endures as a country that embraces poetry as a treasured and valuable gift that must be shared. It is so nice to meet you and share your gift of words. This is a place where you will be inspired by others and learn as we all have from each other. Your poem is a passionate plea of being heard with understanding and I hear, and hope I understand your meaning. It is a powerful and beautiful piece! #7 Blessings. Aloha, Connie
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Shivaji Pandhare
Date: 1/13/2016 9:17:00 AM
dear i like your feelings about my country and i am proud of it and i am very glad someone like you pay attention so quickly and it's my pleasure you praised and gave wonderful comment. thanks.
Date: 1/10/2016 6:47:00 PM
Shivaji, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shivaji Pandhare
Date: 1/11/2016 7:12:00 AM
it has been very surprising that everybody so kind and ready to help anytime it is evidence of you linda how poetry changed and arise compassion in your heart that will never deafeat you and like me close to you. very nice of you thanks
Date: 1/10/2016 1:49:00 PM
WOW, Epic first poem, Shivaji,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shivaji Pandhare
Date: 1/11/2016 7:26:00 AM
your inspiration and bare countanance create inside me surging waves of words that is ready to encounter anonymus fear of death i will pay off for that by my words thanks dear skat a dear

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