Alcoholism

he staggers out
after beating wife to coma...
cirrhosis is near



Contest:" Single senryu-No Nature poems please" sponsored by black eyed Susan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:05 AM
I sure hope this gets on the winners' list. I really enjoy it because it is a way for his wife to get vengeance now she is in a coma!! Good one, Olusegun.
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