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inspired by the quote: ) "Dear alcohol, We had a deal where you would make me funnier, smarter, and a better dancer. I saw the video. We need to talk..."
- Anonymous

Alcohol

Inspirational Quote in Giorgio's contest: "Dear alcohol, We had a deal where you would make me funnier, smarter, and a better dancer. I saw the video. We need to talk..."
- Anonymous    



she has a dear spouse who’s no longer shy in taste of you, he’s gone wild in a mile dancing on his feet as if he’s in sky salsa, hip hop , jazz… mixing them a while his out of tune songs irk her with wry smile dancing with him in stinking smell of rum little by little you’re making him dumb he has been allowed since he has guts at once ignoring her lately was a whambam ‘til his demise comes in a short distance
Dec. 2013 Fourth Place Contest: Impress me with a small poem III Judged: 3/9/14 Sponsor: Poet Giorgio A. V
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Mehta Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, leo
A  Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 2:56 AM
Hello, lovely Leonora, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:37 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Leonora !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 11:07 PM
Hi, Leonora. Reading this one again. You should put the quote that inspired this one at the top above the poem!!
Devnath  Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 11:25 AM
Nice alcoholic action here you have shown " little by little ......making him dumb" and "til his .......short distance". Really active observation. Lovely penned, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Hello Leonora, hope you are well. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 10:06 PM
the last line says it all, sweetie. his demise came in a short distance. Silly fools and their alcohol!! It ruins so many lives!!
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 12:20 AM
I don't know about Dizains, but have a little experience with alcohol, and I reckon you got that right. Well done.
Horsch Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 7:31 AM
I think you did this poem right. It is always nice to see that you posted another good poem....Hugs....Roger
A  Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 6:58 AM
you did wonderfully Leonora, I can smell the man from here. amazing inspiration. Skat
Sivey Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a tremendous Dizain my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here this evening! What a masterful poem about Alcohol, you did very well in describing it! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 12:10 PM
- Alcohol makes song and dance short ........ no eternal lasting joy and happiness - Leonora, thanks for your thoughts and words about Alcohol. - Hope your weekend was relaxing and beautiful. - New week .... second chances :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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