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Alcohol

Falling falling falling
I fell with a deep scornful laughter
Ha! ha!! ha!!!
Thundering still flattering ominously
Out of my buccal cavity
Like I never did
The spirit lives on
9/4/09...B'day
Broken heart filled with no remorse
A man get his weaknesses and flaws revealed
Exposed at times
Too weak for a word
A second like eternity lingering forever
Patience, screaming,wailing,clapping
Chattering,slapping,bickering,tearing
Falling,stooling,sleepwalking and falling
I indeed made a broad way show on my 32"mm
Although not too proud of it
As strong as I'm
I fell. To the recklessness and commonness of every youth
Wasting in the street
Big fat round amber bottles
With her bitter poisonous content
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Sad ....Hope just write and not your life..Sara
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August 13, 2010 at 8:31 PM
LoVe tHe tHiRd LiNe, shOWs ChAraCtEr LoL, EnJoYeD yOuR wRitE *LUV- S.K.A.T.
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