Albino Deer

On the forest floor
An albino deer is born
On my property

To be Cont.

Inspired by the Contest " any Haiku will do "
Sponsored by " Destroyer A Poet ~ "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:13 PM
HG, page one is the first page all Soupers see. I think it's page 13 that you are asking me about. The first page you ever made here. I only found one of the three poems you mentioned in your soupmail as one of your first three. I will go to the other two so you can see what they are.
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:12 PM
aha, this must be the albino deer that you told me about. Awesome!!
Anish Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Is this really true? I have never seen an albino deer - although my sister has a lot of deer on her property. Peace Mattthew Anish
Breidenthal Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 12:07 AM
This is awesome. You are a wonderful poet, I must say. And what did you mean by "us lesser poets?" Always, Laura Ps: Thanks for your very sweet comments. I don't feel like I deserve such praise.
A   Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 3:08 AM
I'm looking for the rest of this poem,,, lol,,, where is it... oooo! now i'm curios on reading it.. take care,..p.d.
A   Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:10 AM
HG, I'm back to say hi! And thank you for the wonderful comment you left me.. I would like to see a picture of this deer. I am a fascinationist of albino creatures. Did you really miss my contest,.. Have a God bless day, and I am sorry to hear about the reason you can't comment me as often. You take care now, always,..p.d. (( i would have loved this entry)) very oddly i have either dram this or read this haiku 5 times... it is amazing,..p.d.
A   Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 6:11 PM
interesting you will have to explain to me. p.d.
Moreno Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Great use of imagery HG, nice work.
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