Albino Deer

On the forest floor An albino deer is born On my property To be Cont. Inspired by the Contest " any Haiku will do " Sponsored by " Destroyer A Poet ~ "

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2013 11:13:00 PM

HG, page one is the first page all Soupers see. I think it's page 13 that you are asking me about. The first page you ever made here. I only found one of the three poems you mentioned in your soupmail as one of your first three. I will go to the other two so you can see what they are.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2013 11:12:00 PM

aha, this must be the albino deer that you told me about. Awesome!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/1/2011 11:37:00 AM

Is this really true? I have never seen an albino deer - although my sister has a lot of deer on her property. Peace Mattthew Anish

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/3/2011 12:07:00 AM

This is awesome. You are a wonderful poet, I must say. And what did you mean by "us lesser poets?" Always, Laura Ps: Thanks for your very sweet comments. I don't feel like I deserve such praise.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2011 3:08:00 AM

I'm looking for the rest of this poem,,, lol,,, where is it... oooo! now i'm curios on reading it.. take care,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2011 1:10:00 AM

HG, I'm back to say hi! And thank you for the wonderful comment you left me.. I would like to see a picture of this deer. I am a fascinationist of albino creatures. Did you really miss my contest,.. Have a God bless day, and I am sorry to hear about the reason you can't comment me as often. You take care now, always,..p.d. (( i would have loved this entry)) very oddly i have either dram this or read this haiku 5 times... it is amazing,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2011 6:11:00 PM

interesting you will have to explain to me. p.d.

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/19/2011 11:37:00 AM

Great use of imagery HG, nice work.