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Albacore

Tremolo vibrations mark this soar like weight lines in my invisible cloak urging more ardor as nerves implore testimony heralding our sick joke while packed within schools of baffled flesh, nose to tailfin in mimicking motion too fresh to witness the feeding thresh since Bigger taints the ocean with devotion with teeth that shred the lagging morsel still ardent to thrive in bloody terror as beaky stabs cut each brave dorsal since error breaks through the standard-bearer once coddled with such lofty ideals and chased by relentless conformity, he feels those arid surface appeals until riddled by gull deformity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2010 3:56:00 PM
nice way with words, great vocabulary--I am jealous.
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:06:00 AM
Interesting Rhyme about the Albacore Tuna or is it a metaphor for something else. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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