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Alba Paradise

Alba Paradise
There on the sea bed is where we play
Among the fishes and plane wreckage
Look there's my plane in bits

Nothing more than a curiosity now
It brought me here and made my form
Killing me along with the others

Other Comet planes fell too
We are not alone on the sea bed
Some are happy and others sad

Me I'm in the middle indifferent now
It depends on my mood and the island
Alba is a paradise forever more


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JIMMY BOOM SEMTEX

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Date: 1/31/2021 10:24:00 AM
Love the personification of a shipwrecked plane in the middle of the sea.
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Nick Armbrister Jimmy Boom Semtex
Date: 1/31/2021 10:39:00 AM
thanx from a series i did on elba island comet plane disaster. with a mermaid twist. i looked at your poems youve done dozens of pages so many. its amazing so many. do you know how many? ive done many since 96 too.

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