Alaska Bids Goodbye

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Some places promise a return visit. I've been to Alaska twice. It never disappoints!

ALASKA BIDS GOODBYE

the forget-me-knots
smile and wave with dewdrop eyes
~ promise of return ~

8/25/2017

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2017 1:39:00 PM

A lovely and touching three liner, Kim. Goodbyes can be so very emotional! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2017 5:39:00 PM

Thanks, Paul :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2017 5:49:00 PM

Love this, Kim. So beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2017 10:03:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2017 12:12:00 PM

A lovely little haiku, I would love to visit Alaska Kim :-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2017 12:14:00 PM

Thanks! I hope you get a chance! <3 Kim

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2017 12:09:00 PM

Lovely Haiku--Alaska will do that!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/25/2017 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay! :)