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Aladdin

alone one night in the living room his lamp came to life appearing to bloom a peaceful aura emitting out the inner spirit without a doubt it all became one and smiled back sharing a subtle truth an inside track with eyes wide open pouring out love he found tears of joy released from above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/3/2020 7:30:00 AM
A very interesting and much underrated poem--I love those oh so rare times I've experienced 'satori' [even wrote a poem about it!]
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Date: 10/2/2020 4:24:00 PM
... Now I see ( had to check Google)- satori is the ultimate comfort of knowing one's self without struggle, freed from usual constaints. M. L, your whole poem flows angelically. Congratulations on its beautiful write and worthy Win!
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:27:00 AM
- A lovely story, P.M. :) - Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:08:00 AM
An interesting account, P.M. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2019 10:10:00 PM
A delightful poem, PM. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/13/2018 9:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your fairytale win, P.M., . :)
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Date: 10/8/2018 9:39:00 PM
Hi P.M., What a good entry and title you have entered in to my fairy tale contest. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. PS, I apologize that it took me so long to judge the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/12/2018 10:58:00 PM
Intriguing ink, veiled and unveiled...I like it. :) gw
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Date: 2/15/2018 11:39:00 PM
Delightful poem, P.M. A gem.
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