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Alabaster Flame

Written: May 25, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Silent One 2nd place contest winner ************************* Quote: "Don’t grieve. Anything you lose comes round in another form.” — By Rumi ( With my honest wishes of a long and healthy life— Very Happy Birthday. The moon still glows—an alabaster flame, memory’s mirror, never the same. Spume drifts, shimmering and bright, not shadowy, but limpid light. You watch sunsets and softly muse— Do you fade, or do you fuse? Their shades shroud loss and gain, a peculiar parity of pleasure and pain. Lessons grasped don’t be acrimonious, regrets mollified primarily harmonious. Time’s conundrum teaches clear— Delicate days are a deep fear. To your tender time, you’d tell and attire, Beware quixotry, yet seize the desire. Do not anathemize your fall— Failure’s anodyne heals all. Though tristful shadows at times prowl, still you liaise with joy, still you howl. Twilight or dawn, the soul’s refrain— amaranthine light will remain.
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Guptar Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your high placement in this contest with a lovely poem on your twilight. It is full of beautiful imagery of life. Particularly appreciated the last stanza, ending on a positive note. Sorry to be commenting late on account of health reasons.. In fact, I have been escaping quite a number of contests, unable to sit for long at my desk on account of bodily pains.. Wish you a pleasant forthcoming weekend.
One Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 2:03 PM
Great quote by Rumi.. Your poem is emotive and reflective... It flows well with the rhymes and the ending is profound.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:29 AM
I'm sincerely in awe of your ability to rhyme and provide in-depth meaning in your poetry. Rumi is one of my favorites. Best wishes with this contest entry. Faving and wishing you well.
Brul Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 6:20 PM
Simply sublime! I love the truths unveiled here. ^___^ a pleasure to read. ^___^ JCB
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 8:33 AM
Perfect appreciations with plenty of emotion.
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