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Akuas Poemmore Then a Rap

I wont hurt you baby,now turn the lights low,he whispers in her ear and his hand moves cautiously slow, down to her thighs,kissing every inch of her neck,lust on his mind,turning what was to be a good girl into a wreck,temptation is a mess cause wat seamed to be a his threat, is now a thought in her mind tellin hem baby no not yet,but shes wet and hes ready to mop away her innocence,to her its intimate,but in his mind its just simple sex, instead of saying this he just continues working hickeys on her, without a responsible concept he leaves his contraceptive,oh dear,now here comes the strange throwing up and feeling different pains turns her attention to this helpless shell of man,cursing his name in the mirror alone pointing the blame,cause he left just as quick as he came,bruised up without marks, his remarks leaves a scar thinking nothing of her todays tryna make it till tomar,see he has a boo she pregnant too so what is this little boy to do with one almost here the other in 7 months due,the only thing he knows how,run and hide,pray to GOD for wings to fly, only to get tired an rest where he left at,his hearts not where his chests at more like where he last slept at,the first wasnt his but his is being raised by a step dad,thats so sad it took two but now its 3 in this equation,rather be with your new girl then with your baby elating, lifes crazy aint it...

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Date: 10/20/2013 10:48:00 PM
I see you finished that poem. It's very good and so real.
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:51:00 PM
Dominique, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:38:00 PM
Dominique, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 10/19/2013 3:20:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Dominique ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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