Air......O

i .......want to take.......you
          in my arms
     kissing what i believe
 but ,( you are a ghost )
    and will not be touched
       yet..you touch me
                living...
        even when i sleep
you are the deepest part of me,
         a sleepless spirit
              my love
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Chircop Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 4:36 AM
you started out so fine--what a beautiful poem,can relate to it--excellent----charma
Brown Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 4:22 AM
Orphani, excellent writing. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your future writing. Love, Carol
Dover Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 3:29 AM
so often in life other people speak truth about your life -as if you were other people a sea of souls.Well there's only one person who can't get some sleep and that's me!
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