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Air......O

i .......want to take.......you in my arms kissing what i believe but ,( you are a ghost ) and will not be touched yet..you touch me living... even when i sleep you are the deepest part of me, a sleepless spirit my love

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/19/2009 4:36:00 AM

you started out so fine--what a beautiful poem,can relate to it--excellent----charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/19/2009 4:22:00 AM

Orphani, excellent writing. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your future writing. Love, Carol

Anthony Dover

Date: 8/19/2009 3:29:00 AM

so often in life other people speak truth about your life -as if you were other people a sea of souls.Well there's only one person who can't get some sleep and that's me!