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Air

Title 3/ Air
Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air.
(Ralph Waldo Emerson)

Live in the sunshine:

As the air strolls neath the elaborate branches 
Weaving between dreams of the world
Of crimson sunshade across the spring sky stanzas patches
Waltzed into world's tunes power unfurled

Swim the sea:

Of serene air that starts to sate swan swim 
Transcending forward wonder-less
In Refreshing spring strokes of blue sea hymns
Numberless and endless 

Drink the wild air:

Spellbound by the silence sweet scent ray’s streaks
Among the aroma of petrichor
Effulgent on limitless verdant mountain peaks
Viewing, embracing, and sharing her 

3/19/2024
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George Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Congratulations dear, nice read Eve.
Narain Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Love this short poem. Well penned.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Air" is a wonderful write with a lovely picture. Have a blessed day.............
Swan Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 10:32 PM
What a fabulous quote: 'Drink the wild air'! I like the 'blue sea hymns' I had to look up petrichor and effulgent - yes indeed that smell of rain is a sharing of the wild air, and the bright radiance of green mountains seems other-worldly and speaks of awe. J :)
Rodgers Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Dear Eve, I love how you beautifully captured the essence of living freely and embracing the wonders around us. Your wonderful imagery evokes a sense of liberation as if the air we breathe holds infinite possibilities. It's a call to immerse ourselves in nature's symphony and drink in the wild beauty surrounding us. Eve, what a refreshing and inspiring reflection on life's boundless adventures. - Blessings, Daniel
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Thank you, Daniel. your words of encouragement and inspiring.
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