Air

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Title 3/ Air Live in the sunshine, swim the sea, drink the wild air. (Ralph Waldo Emerson) Live in the sunshine: As the air strolls neath the elaborate branches Weaving between dreams of the world Of crimson sunshade across the spring sky stanzas patches Waltzed into world's tunes power unfurled Swim the sea: Of serene air that starts to sate swan swim Transcending forward wonder-less In Refreshing spring strokes of blue sea hymns Numberless and endless Drink the wild air: Spellbound by the silence sweet scent ray’s streaks Among the aroma of petrichor Effulgent on limitless verdant mountain peaks Viewing, embracing, and sharing her 3/19/2024

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Tonye George

Date: 3/29/2024 4:15:00 AM

Congratulations dear, nice read Eve.

Jay Narain

Date: 3/28/2024 9:30:00 AM

Love this short poem. Well penned.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/28/2024 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Air" is a wonderful write with a lovely picture. Have a blessed day.............

Jeanette Swan

Date: 3/27/2024 10:32:00 PM

What a fabulous quote: 'Drink the wild air'! I like the 'blue sea hymns' I had to look up petrichor and effulgent - yes indeed that smell of rain is a sharing of the wild air, and the bright radiance of green mountains seems other-worldly and speaks of awe. J :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/20/2024 4:38:00 AM

Dear Eve, I love how you beautifully captured the essence of living freely and embracing the wonders around us. Your wonderful imagery evokes a sense of liberation as if the air we breathe holds infinite possibilities. It's a call to immerse ourselves in nature's symphony and drink in the wild beauty surrounding us. Eve, what a refreshing and inspiring reflection on life's boundless adventures. - Blessings, Daniel

Eve Roper
Date: 3/20/2024 10:52:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel. your words of encouragement and inspiring.