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Ain'T Done Yet

AIN'T DONE YET What does it feel like to no longer exist Does memory linger on, will our soul be missed Do minds still function though our bodies are dust Answers to these queries I'll find out I trust Could be tomorrow, it could be today Here's the bottom line, I don't have much say Hope I'm around for few years to come Hate to succumb if my life here's not done Haven't seen Hawaii or the Taj Mahal Cruised the Danube, seen China's Great Wall The Eiffel Tower is still on my list Ireland's blarney stone I haven't yet kissed Hate to miss a trip to the land down under The Statue of Liberty one of the world's wonders Seems like I should stick around for a while Haven't had the thrill of feeding the crocodiles Perhaps I'll forgo the crocodile thing There's a chance it will hasten my very last fling So all in all, I'll be around for a while Missed seeing these landmarks since I was a child!

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Date: 11/2/2021 11:35:00 AM
Hello Happy jack, I have been to many place myself. I remember them. Love, darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/2/2021 3:05:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, yes i am fortunate to have seen these many places. Love Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2021 12:39:00 PM
You are very fortunate dear Darlene! Love Happy Jack XOX
Date: 11/2/2021 10:48:00 AM
Well I've done two of them, been up the eiffel twr and kissed the Blarney stone ( I never shut up) Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2021 12:48:00 PM
You is one lucky dude Sir Thomas!!! Don't have much chance at my advanced age! Oh well...
Date: 11/2/2021 9:27:00 AM
Another look at a life and its adventures. I have seen lots, but there's more I'll never see. I think I'll forego the crocodiles, if you don't mind. Thanks for writing this, Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2021 12:35:00 PM
Crocodiles can be tons of fun??? No? Well I've never had a close up experience but methinks that it could be quite "awe inspiring"!!! LOL
Date: 11/2/2021 5:17:00 AM
Beautiful Jack. Rhymed couplets and a yearning to see the world....KEEP ON TRUCKIN' ...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/2/2021 5:45:00 AM
WOW a GREAT big thank you Mr. John!!! KEEP ON TRUCKIN' my man...

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