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'ain'T But One Way Out'

you attack my soul
with viscous anger and pain
and destroy my blues...

'One Way Out' - The Allman Brothers Band Live at Filmore East, 1971

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 18, 2010 at 7:43 PM

Good Senryu ..good year .. good band .. who can forget ... Greg Allman and Cher?? great write Tim.. still partying? luv.. "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2010 at 5:56 PM

GOOD one, and thanks so much for your comment on my spring poem. LUv, andrea

Debbie Guzzi

February 17, 2010 at 6:39 PM

A real good cut! ;) Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

February 17, 2010 at 5:00 PM

I didn't expect the last line Tim? it's a good thing to destroy the blues..isn't it? (ponder) HUGS Light & Love

John Freeman

February 15, 2010 at 6:16 PM

Awesome Senryu Tim. Provokes some thought. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Brian Strand

February 15, 2010 at 12:27 AM

Congrats on your recent contest success Tim.Rgds Brian

Adell Foster

February 13, 2010 at 12:14 AM

This is an awesome senryu, powerpacked imagery flowing from so few lines. It is a pleasure to have read for you my friend, I thank you Tim for sharing the read. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Charmaine Chircop

February 12, 2010 at 11:25 PM

Deep Senryu indeed..Wrap your Soul in your Heart and keep it warm and safe..beautiful..Charma

Marty Owens

February 12, 2010 at 9:36 PM

Very cool senryu....enjoyed....Hey Tim no one was supposed to guess what my poem was about but I think you and Andrea did....lol...Marty

Connie Marcum Wong

February 12, 2010 at 4:34 PM

A powerful Senryu Tim. I enjoyed reading it. Aloha, Connie

February 10, 2010 at 4:56 PM

This one packs a punch! Give the reader something to think about. I like the title. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 10, 2010 at 9:30 AM

I encourage you to continue writing Tim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol