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'ain'T But One Way Out'

you attack my soul with viscous anger and pain and destroy my blues... 'One Way Out' - The Allman Brothers Band Live at Filmore East, 1971

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 7:43:00 PM
Good Senryu ..good year .. good band .. who can forget ... Greg Allman and Cher?? great write Tim.. still partying? luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/18/2010 5:56:00 PM
GOOD one, and thanks so much for your comment on my spring poem. LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/17/2010 6:39:00 PM
A real good cut! ;) Light & Love
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:00:00 PM
I didn't expect the last line Tim? it's a good thing to destroy the blues..isn't it? (ponder) HUGS Light & Love
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Date: 2/15/2010 6:16:00 PM
Awesome Senryu Tim. Provokes some thought. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:27:00 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Tim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/13/2010 12:14:00 AM
This is an awesome senryu, powerpacked imagery flowing from so few lines. It is a pleasure to have read for you my friend, I thank you Tim for sharing the read. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 2/12/2010 11:25:00 PM
Deep Senryu indeed..Wrap your Soul in your Heart and keep it warm and safe..beautiful..Charma
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:36:00 PM
Very cool senryu....enjoyed....Hey Tim no one was supposed to guess what my poem was about but I think you and Andrea did....lol...Marty
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:34:00 PM
A powerful Senryu Tim. I enjoyed reading it. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 2/10/2010 4:56:00 PM
This one packs a punch! Give the reader something to think about. I like the title. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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Date: 2/10/2010 9:30:00 AM
I encourage you to continue writing Tim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:35:00 AM
A lot of passion in both the music, and the poem!! Well done, Tim! ~
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