Aim

I shoot and I score
direct hit, dead on center
aim is everything!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 12, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today JB. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. I hope you will consider becoming a premium member here at the Soup. Love,Carol
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September 11, 2009 at 7:52 AM
With the pen, tongue, gun, or knife that idea is right. Love the short Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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