AI Poetry

Though eminently computable,
born in silicon fog, 
it's a baby that's not beautiful,
a disloyal, faithless dog. 
It's a welcome to an empty room,
a monster's sightless eye,
a bottle of cheap perfume -
the poetry of AI.

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Hiya Sharma

September 15, 2026 at 4:08 AM

Wow this is so clever as ever! "it's a babe that is not beautiful" lol that left me dizzy somehow, imagining ai as a babe hahahaha, AI left the chat here absolutely! 😱😂 And the way you've written "a monster's sightless eye, a bottle of cheap perfume -" How amazing as always! Love your descriptions dear David ~ adding this in my FAVES of ofcourse love it, sending you poetic light 🧚💫🍂✨🌙

David Crandall

September 15, 2026 at 7:08 AM

Thanks, Hiya - nice to hear from you!😊

Ink Empress

September 14, 2026 at 11:42 PM

Hahah i dunno why I absolutely love the line "it's a babe that is not beautiful, a disloyal, faithless dog. " hahah babe that word! So good!!! And also cheap perfume. You know how to describe somethin distasteful so effortlessly dear david This is a fave for me Pleasure reading Sending you light always

Ink Empress

September 15, 2026 at 7:20 AM

Babe still is for women. Not for babies. 😳 I prefer babe here hahah

David Crandall

September 15, 2026 at 6:55 AM

I listen to a lot of traditional British folk music, and, long ago, I guess "babe" was slang for "baby". When I was a young man (quite some time ago), "babe" was slang for a beautiful, sexy lady. I forget that other people might not be living in the sixteenth century, so I will probably change the word to "baby"!

David Crandall

September 15, 2026 at 6:54 AM

My thought for that first line "a babe that is not beautiful" is that a baby is always beautiful, so one that is not, somethings got to be wrong - what? and a dog is always faithful. If not - what's wrong?

David Crandall

September 15, 2026 at 6:52 AM

Hi Ink, glad you appreciated it. Here's a confession. This line popped into my head, "A babe that is not beautiful", then "a dog that has no faith". Then I built a poem around it.